“What’s with you being so scared of your dad, you’re a big girl!” said Andy, sleepy eyed as he slowly kissed the nape of her neck.
“You won’t understand. We aren’t supposed to…..you know.. do these things before marriage” she said “My parents would freak out if they found out about us.”
“You know I’ll be leaving day after” he said, now opening his eyes “I think you should come along too Shivi, take a transfer.”
He waited for her to say something while stroking her hair and slowly she turned around to look at him. There was something between them, lust or love she didn’t know, but she felt drawn to him like a leaf being carried to a distant horizon by the wind.
“Andy…I can’t…I don’t know what this is!”
“I know.. but don’t you think we should give this thing a chance?”
“My parents would never agree!” she said breaking free and moving to draw the curtains. In the first rays of the morning sun she looked beautiful, her hair cascading upto her waist on her bare back. Shivi wasn’t conventionally beautiful but she had an allure that made her attractive.
“Let’s just take a month or two and see where this goes?” Andy asked sitting up. He was tall, so tall with broad shoulders like he had walked right out of a fairy tale sans the white horse of-course. And Shivi couldn’t help but feel drawn towards him.
“You know this is all just attraction!” she said throwing her hands up in the air.
“Maybe it is or maybe it’s something more. We’ll find out eventually but for that we need to give some time to each other.” and he walked upto her. She couldn’t help but feel the connection. It was overwhelming. The proximity with him, his breath and the way her body felt entwined with his was made up of stuff written about in books.
“Hmm…fine I’ll give it a thought. But leave now or I’ll be disowned.” she said pulling him closer and kissing him gently.
“Ahh… “he grinned and picked her up “Not so soon!” And they floated into each other’s arms, their bodies uniting in passion creating a symphony together. But just then there was a knock at her door and then another.
“Shivi” called someone from outside. It was her father.
“Oh my God ! Dad! No one could ever know what happened here Andy! No one should! They shouldn’t see you!” she said in a hushed tone with panic written all over her face.
“Shivi. Open the door” this time it was her mother.
“Don’t worry. I’ll leave. See you at the office” Andy said as he picked up his clothes and jumped out of her first floor balcony.
Shivi steadied herself, put on her clothes and then opened the door “What is it Dad?” she said rubbing her eyes as if she had been asleep all along but inside her heart was about to explode.
“We heard something, rather someone here. Was someone here? Tell us the truth Shivi” said her mother as she looked suspiciously around, opening the cupboard and then the bathroom door.
“Oh God! I’m going to sleep. Look all you want.” Shivi said and went back to bed closing her eyes.
When her parents left, satisfied that there was no one in her room, she walked up to the balcony. To her surprise Andy was there on the other side of the road looking towards her. He hadn’t left, instead he was there waiting anxiously to see if everything was alright. Seeing him worried about her Shivi realized that maybe this was not just an attraction, maybe it was in the stars.
As she stood unable to look away from him, her phone beeped with a message from him. It read “I think I’m in love with you. Come to Sydney Shivi. Please?” and he looked longingly towards her.
She smiled, nodded and replied “Okay. Sydney it is!”
Linking this to the Speakeasy weekly prompt, which is to write a piece in 750 words or less using the prompt โNo one could ever know what happened here.โ anywhere in the post.
http://www.yeahwrite.me/speakeasy/148-open/ |
Very romantic and sweet! Nice job!
breath taking dear ๐
Aww,this one made me smile-such a sweet romantic story-loved the hopeful ending too:-)Perfect for the coming VDay mood ":D
Quite a romantic story.
Thanks Aisha ๐
Thanks so much ๐
Thanks …glad you liked it ๐
Thanks Ranu ๐
Whew, that was a close call! I'm glad she decided to give love a try… I hope it works out for them ๐
Love engulfs you…this was brilliant…
Ahhh I love this kind of love! ๐
A sweet love story and I guess it comes during an apt time. Is this for Valentines day tomorrow? ๐
I hope so too Janna ๐
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Me too ๐ Thanks for dropping by Soumya ๐
Oh no I didn't write it specially for Valentine's Day but I guess it goes with the theme….Thanks for stopping by Prasanna… ๐
Yes it is an excellent story for Valentine! Thanks.
Wil, ABCW Team.
very nice….i want to know more
Lovely Story
Thanks Wil ๐
glad you liked it ๐
Thanks Ali ๐
I could feel the panic as they were about to be caught in the act. Boy that was a close call. I loved the ending…so romantic!! This story could go on…did she go with him? Did they end up together? Loved this story! โฅ
Dammit. Im so jealous of Andy. Shivi's parents should have checked the sheets ๐
Loved it
Cheers
CRD
Updated mine. Do drop by.
yay for happing endings!! so many dark stories this week, I was beginning to worry. ๐
Thanks Kathy…glad you loved the story… I'm guessing se went with him, maybe I'll write the next part as well ๐
haha yes they should have ..! Will surely drop by yours ๐
haha…glad I could give a positive ending ๐
This is a very sweet love story. A wonderful way to start my day : )
Thanks Valerie..glad this story could do that for you ๐
I love the romance and optimism in this! Lovely take on the prompts, Nabanita! Thanks for joining us at the speakeasy! ๐
Thanks Suzanne…It's my pleasure ๐
An apt take for valentines week ๐ please tell me andy is nuthing less than hugh grant :p only then will i imagine shivi in sydney.
Oh even better Andy is Hugh Grant plus Bradley Cooper plus Ryan Gosling!
Such a sweet, happy story with no sinister or shocking twist. How lovely!
Thanks ๐
Wonderful storyline. Very well written. Can you please post what happened next:)
Thanks Ashwini …will surely try and post a sequel ๐
I often dont comment or vote unless I really like something
This is a write where narration flowed with storyline with amazing picturistic feeling
~Rahul
Was Shivi sure about Andy's love or it was a big risk that she took?
Very sweet! and Sydney it should have been… I am sure Shivi wouldn't want to life her life with a big "what if??" hanging over her ๐
Oho mush of the nicest kind filled with love, longing and passion.
Beautiful Prompt Nabanita…and a beautiful take too.. you write really well.
I am looking forward to connect with you wrt to ur address, possible to share the details? ๐
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excellent story!
It was very realistic and utterly romantic.I kept smiling throughout.It surely was love all i could feel.keep spreading love ๐ nz
Thanks Rahul glad you liked it ๐
What's love without the risk Jaideep? ๐
True that's what I thought while writing it Seeta ๐
hehe too much, is it Rachna ๐ ?
Thanks ๐
Thanks Ekta ๐
I have sent you a request on FB will share my details there ๐
hehe thanks so much ๐
Nicely developed and woven around the "No one could…"
Thanks so much ๐
You really write these things very well, Naba!
Thanks so much Suresh ๐
aww.. thats wonderful!
Thanks Pooja ๐