“Coming Mom..” came the response but there was no sign of her seven year old.
“Jamie” she yelled again “Come down or I’m coming up to get you! You already missed the school bus today!”
That was enough to get Jamie come running downstairs.
“Sorry Mom!” he said as he pulled her hand and blew her a kiss.
“You know honey you can’t be late…Now that you missed the school bus I’m going to be late to office too!” she said to Jamie as she locked the door “Not to mention you teacher is going to punish you too!”
“Ahh don’t worry Mom…I’ll tell them it was all Howie’s fault” said Jamie as they walked towards the car.
“Honey I don’t think your teacher cares about your invisible friend” said Ella as she started the car “By the way what were you doing up there? I’m going to…” and she stooped without completing her sentence. They were at the turn which lead to Jamie’s school and there was a long line of police cars, paramedics and ambulances ahead.
“Mom what happened here?” asked Jamie looking outside the window.
“Don’t know honey” she said “You wait in the car..I’ll find out” saying she alighted from the car and walked towards the small crowd that had gathered.
“What happened here?” Ella asked a woman standing next to her.
“The school bus met with an accident this morning…Thankfully nothing major but still students are hurt….” she said pointing towards the bus “It’s so sad..isn’t it?”
Ella nodded but the moment she saw the bus her heart sank. It was the same bus that Jamie had missed. It was a lucky escape. She stood there for a moment looking at the anxious parents, the injured students and the turned over bus.
“Jamie!” she blurted out suddenly and walked back towards the car to the side that Jamie was sitting. She placed her hands on the window and looked at her seven year old son and thanked God that he missed the bus today.
“Mom?” said Jamie as he observed her with a quizzical look on his face.
“You wanted to go to the zoo right?” she said as Jamie looked confused and nodded “Let’s go then… Today we’ll have a mother-son day out..what do you say to that?” and she planted a kiss on Jamie’s cheeks.
“Mom are you alright?” asked Jamie “It’s a school day you know!”
“Not any more…!” she said as she walked over to the driver’s side and got into the car “So are you in for a fun day boy?”
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Jamie giggled at this and nodded saying “Only if I get burgers and pizzas too…”
“As you wish honey!” Ella said as they drove off from the site of the accident. Though she felt bad for the other children, she was also glad that Jamie was not in the bus, that he had missed it. He was all she had and she couldn’t bear the thought of even a scratch on him.
When they were at the zoo watching the giraffe Jamie tugged at Ella’s purse and said “Mom it was good that I missed the bus today…I’m having so much fun…” At which Ella replied “Yes honey I too feel blessed today!”
Also, linking this to ABC Wednesday for this week – L for me is Lucky Escape this week...
Linking this to UBC too.
Great idea to write short stories with emotions from A to Z. Carver, ABC Wed. Team
Being a mum, I can totally relate to that emotion. Very nicely articulated naba.. π
beautiful narration Nabanita..I envy your imagination power..:)
Dil ko chuu gaiiii π
How this reminds me on the little panicky situations a mother goes through when something is up with the kids!
Yes, a story with a beautiful ending!
oh, MY! I've had mornings (before the accident) like that, too!
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Nice read π
Well written one π
This was a good one naba π
That was indeed a blessing. Waiting to read more stories π
Sometimes things just happen for the best. By the end of the challenge you'll have a bunch of great stories Nabanita!
This flows quite well, Nabanita! Yes life has its own ways to shower its blessings upon us!
Great story and word pictures. Makes you heart jump into your throat, Beautifully done.
This has happened to me too. I thought something that happened with me was a bad and I had a tough time but now looking back I think that it was a blessing in my life. Strange how your perspectives change when looking in hindsight. Good one Naba!
Everything happens for a reason, that's all it says! Wonderful story about blessing in disguise! π
Blessed – it is a Blissful emotions!!! Nabanita I am becoming a fan for your narration style!!!
aww.. you never know how destiny and the imaginary friend helps you keep out of difficult situations π
little blessings in disguises…..nice one…
Hope they have great mother son day out for now and forever …..
Indeed blessed. Such a cute little story!!
Naba it touched a chord for various reasons. True like the story so many times I forget to look at the blessings..so lost in the day to day running around.
Naba, you have a treasure trove of stories waiting to be published π As a mom, I know exactly what she must have felt- feeling blessed and yet feeling sad about the loss of the other moms. Nicely told.
Nicely captured… They are feeling blessed in their own thoughts… Nice perspectives.
Don't we love blessings that comes in disguise! Wow that's a great story!
The pleasures of everyday life… we miss it completely untila calamity comes kncoking!
Whatever happens,happens for the best ! Super !
Maybe it was Howie's doing π but glad that sad things have a silver lining too.
Very sweet story. Blessing depicted beautifully Great mind think alike and Blessing is a good word to blog about.
That's a beautiful story…you never know what one event might lead too…that's why nothing is ever good or bad. It just is.
Very well told.
Oh blessed indeed! Thank God for such luck! π
A happy outcome for the mother and son. Fete. Kismet. You just never know. Visiting from UBC.
I too had an imaginary friend. Beautiful emotions packed here! Nice post.
Beautifully articulated! Waiting for more :)Thanks for stopping by…
I am amazed by how U bring up new episodes every day ! Lucky Jamie . Some times that one second can bring good/ bad fate
Good one:)
A lovely post! I like the unvisible friend that of course is his guide or guardian angel. That's my opinon:)
Lovely story! I am so glad he missed the bus. You know, I probably would have done the same thing. Things happen for a reason and this story perfectly illustrates that! β₯
Wonderful narration and good storyline. Loved it. π
Lovely story and its really a blessing sometimes or all the time.
wow Nabanita, loved it… such a sweet story… and that last dialogue.. awesome… π
Oh wow this was precious π
Because at times we never know what is really instore for us.. no?
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Thank God !! I felt the blessing when I read it ! Well woven, Naba π
Thats sweet…One of the everyday stories of every mom, apart from the bus accident…
You tell the story so well. I was so right there with that mum, could feel her emotions… Indeed blessed!!
Blessed she was! Great story, sad for the other kids but joyous for Jamie and his mom.
That is an amazing tale…So his invisible friend helped him escape… A blessing in disguise indeed.. Nicely woven story..
This is a smoothly written story. But more than that, it was a more than necessary reminder. I needed it tonight. Thank you Naba!
It happens in real life also….
Thankfully Jamie was saved…
Wonderful story you weaved
I am happy that Jamie is saved, Well written.
It is weird how we feel. I know you have portrayed what all of would feel, but I somehow felt bad that one could celebrate that when the close friends of the kid were hurt.
Certainly very fortunate!!
Love the story, Naba.
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Beautiful story, beautifully weaved!
A blessing in disguise is one of the best blessings. It comes at a time when we least expect it. π Nice story Nabanita.
Good story and what a blessing for Jamie and Ella! π
This indeed was a blessing… beautiful story π
Wow thats wonderful expressed like the previous one. So many instances when people feel blessed for missing the plan, train. We had some of the family friends, who missed their trip to Uttarakhand, before the disaster happened there! They felt blessed and lucky that they dint get leaves from their office or plan cancelled due to some or the other reason. Love your story! π
Can relate with this, only having one child. Well, he's an adult now. Great story. π
Lovely story and well written. Blessed indeed!
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I know I understand what you feel… I guess sometimes we chose one over the other just to count our blessings..
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Lovely story! There have been instances of people missing flights which crashed. They are truly blessed!
Oh yes I have read about some…
good story, nice put together .. but how do you get so many comments… pls. share the secret.. i dont get many
very nice story indeed
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You have great theme and fantastic challenge writing fiction. Would love to read what you write for the other alphabetsβ¦:)