Full of bitterness and spite,
Buried tears of rage in her heart reside,
Such her dislike for his ominous might.
In starry restless nights,
Silently sobbing; terrified by his smite,
With not a soul to share the fear of his ghastly sight!
Once a kind heart like a candle burning bright,
With love and ardor for the world outside,
But now wrecked with hostility inside,
Such is her sorry plight.
As wreaking havoc, towards her, he strides,
Smirking at her quivered might,
She lives a prisoner to his rules vile.
But fight, my dear fight,
He deserves not you doing right.
Forsake his fear, change life’s tide.
Escape! Far away from his world alight.
Disown the suffocation! You decide,
To never see him! Yet again be the candle bright!
Nice one Nabanita
It's painful and motivating at the same time. Well written Naba
Thanks Ali..
Thanks Saru !
Wonderful! "Rise again, like a phoenix" – I love poems with such themes. Loved it. Fortitude is a powerful word! 🙂
This is something I wrote a while back: Who Else But . . ., it would be great if you could read it.
Thanks Sankara..would definitely check it out!
well written ..
A truly motivating write, Naba. Perhaps its worth taking that fight! Very well written.
Thanks Ankur!
Thanks Panchali..!
lovely words and very inspiring Naba 🙂
Thanks Su 🙂
Nicely penned. Hope it gives hope to those who are battling the depression and finding courage to fight back.
Thanks Rachna. I hope so too.
प्रभावी !!!
शुभकामना
आर्यावर्त
Thanks Rajneesh !
Nicely penned… Courage to fight takes us miles
Dropping by Writing on the go
all it takes is one step forward, but the leg is so strongly bound with iron castings that even a small step is difficult….but the day she decides to take that step, she will have managed to break free…. lovely lovely lovely!!
Thanks Rohan!
Thanks princess 🙂 You are right it that first difficult step that is need !
Highly power packed and energizing poem,Naba !!
Thanks !