With vows around the holy fire it was finally time for the stars to serenade the moon, for Deepak to whisper sweet-nothings in to Mira’s ears, to bathe in the glory of a passionate beginning but wait, instead of flower petals why was there a huge container of blue colored liquid on their marital bed?
Standing there, her clothes disheveled, Mira recalled how happy she had been a few moments ago basking in the warmth of love and the hope of a new life until a hell broke loose.
It was not euphoria she experienced but a nagging, burning sensation on her skin with tears gliding down her cheeks through fresh bruises and cuts.
She stood drenched in kerosene, beaten and frozen, clothes torn, with her husband dead at her feet, a knife covered in blood in her hand, the blue container, empty, next to him; but ironically she looked most beautiful now, wounded; even more than she did when draped in expensive flawless fabrics moments ago.
Linking this post to Writetribe’s Wednesday-prompt-2014-5 , Lillie Mcferrin’s Five-sentence-fiction-frozen and NaBloPoMo
Fab post, want to read more
Is this part of a novel or something you are writing yourself?
well written wondering what was the reason?????,,i cant comment without google+.dxbnidblog
Whooaa.. this is something.. Superb.. Are you going to continue the story ?? Would love to read 🙂
Thanks Pixie 🙂
I just wrote it myself …Hope you liked it 🙂
Thanks…About the commenting issue let me see if I can incorporate something…:)
Thanks Jyotsna…. I haven't thought about continuing it but let me think 🙂
Oh my god… but why????? You should write more on this…:)
Loved the superb twist in the end but like others left me wondering about the reason for her actions. BTW, love the new look on your blog. Just fab 🙂
Naba,
Let me tell you, all these days i was reading your blogposts, but every time I tried commenting, something used to go wrong. I hope this comment gets published.
That was a simply brilliant piece 🙂 It's something that leaves the readers craving for more 🙂
Beautiful use of the language:) Looking forward to reading more 🙂
Brilliant and quite sad. But, love the way you scripted the story:)
http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/02/01/wednesday-prompt-2014-5-she-looked-most-beautiful
How do you write so well? You are one of my favorite bloggers!
wow! it happens so often in India. but a woman's Durgavatar is just so beautiful! lovely post 🙂
What a chilling wedding night ! It must have been a night mare for her. Well written.
Quite a picturesque write up! 🙂
You know what I guess I have to Seeta 🙂
I know right Prasanna..maybe I should write more one it, just another short post maybe 🙂
And thanks for liking the theme….
Thanks Sreeja..Looks like your comment finally got published… Thanks so much , glad that you like my posts 🙂
Thanks Vishal.. 🙂
Thanks Namrata you just made my day 🙂
Yes it does, doesn't it? Thanks for reading and yes Durgavatar is indeed beautiful
Thanks Diana 🙂
Thanks Shesha 🙂
saddening story,nice too.
Thanks Rudra 🙂
Wow!! This was such a stunning and emotional piece of writing! Excellent work!!
Thanks so much..glad you liked it 🙂
You have to continue writing this, Nabanita! So engrossing, I want to read more! 🙂
Thanks Aayesha..Glad you feel that way…I think I really have to write the next part!
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