To a distant land; far, far away,
To a haven of dreams; of desires, of love,
Where qualms linger afar at bay,
This, a reverie I magically wove.
I fly away to this tranquil quay,
Miles away from this mundane cove.
My utopian dream or a mere cliché?
By the oceanfront; walking on the wet sand alone,
Together with none except thoughts of my own,
Basking as the moon’s silver rays adorn,
The songs of youth, of yonder gone,
With the sound of a ship, a mere faint moan.
I stroll with joy on that beach intone,
My heart’s strange urge or a sheer impulse?
To escape mundane daily chores,
Lying with a book of tales untold,
A few days away in the great outdoors,
In Summery heat or freezing cold,
Few days in life devoid of usual bores,
The serenity of my childhood old,
Too much to ask or a likely fold?
that's magical. Great weave of words.Like this line:'together with none except thoughts of my own'
Thanks Sir !
The omnipresent peace Ahh! every one searches for one. Beautiful poem
Lyrical and beautiful! Loved it Naba! 🙂
Phenomenal writing. Ahh..getting away from the daily grind can be refreshing and energizing. Lovely piece of writing, Naba.
Beautiful composition Naba!:)A beautiful read!
the words have been strung together to sort of relish into a state of oblivion. Wonderful stuff!
Richa
Beautiful. You are sooooo good! *looks with admiring eyes* 🙂
Beautiful composition dear friend. Amazing one.
Thanks Vijay !
Thanks Zooni 🙂
Thanks so much Panchali 🙂
Thanks Bushra 🙂
Thanks Richa 🙂
hehe…thanks 🙂 *Fluttering eyelashes* 😉
Thanks so much 🙂
Oh, u write so well….some of the lines really made me sit up …and congrats u got published…u are living a dream i hope to live one day 🙂
Hi again….I just bought your book…Would tell you how it was ^_^
first time here but loved the content
The serenity of my childhood old,
Too much to ask or a likely fold?.. too much nostalgic .. i like !
My first time here 🙂 and must say I really love the way you write 🙂
Thank you Ritesh 🙂 .. Its just a short story which has been published…
Thanks you..Hope you like my story 🙂
Thanks Ankur 🙂
Thanks Su 🙂 Hope you keep visiting !
Good one, nicely composed.
Thanks Indrani 🙂
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Beautifully written Nabanita… And the picture compliments the poem very well 🙂
A likely fold if you can manage to get away from the groping hands of this mundane life!
Nice one! You even wrote that it's cliche… 😀
Liked it.
Sure will have a look ..
Thanks 🙂
Thanks so much Amruta..Long time since you were here 🙂 Nice to see you back!
Thanks Brendan..Glad you liked it !
"My Utopian dream or a mere cliche" , All words so beautifully strung…
Thanks Aditi 🙂
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प्रभावी !!!
शुभकामना
आर्यावर्त
Thanks!
reading your wonder verse I could feel I was easing out somewhere atop on Tiger Hills if Darj or a distant and lonely guest house … in Kalimpong … away from the buzz..for a peaceful silent and aloof trip .. to be able to talk to give time to myself ..
Wonderful, as usual !!
Thanks 🙂 And I had Shillong in my mind away from all the noise and hullabaloo of life!
What an credible flutter of the wings of imagination ! I also loved the whisper of the words.
Thanks Kajal!
Very evocative poem!
By the oceanfront; walking on the wet sand alone,
Together with none except thoughts of my own, – these lines made me want to rush to the seaside and take a lonely walk along a pristine beach.
Keep writing 🙂
Thanks Kalpana..Glad you liked it 🙂
Beautiful composition………
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Thanks Debopam … I do visit Kenofolios as well 🙂
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