Let Me Go

Feb 4
NabanitaDhar

You barge in unannounced.
Not a word,
Not a sound.
To take me
With you away
While she lays asleep
Without a clue.
Tell me thus
How do I tell her about you?


Ages ago, I called upon you
Your enormous bosom drew.
But you shunned me,
Hide and seek it was.
I sought too,
But was left beaten blue.
Why come now?
When a life I lead,
Of lovely hue.


Sun rays I feel,
Purple grapes appeal,
I breathe freely now,
A doting fiancée
Heavenly glow.
Let me go,
Instead take those in woe,
Oh Death!
Let me Go!


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Linking this post to Writetribe’s 100 Words on Saturday 2014 – 5 and NaBloPoMo

46 thoughts on “Let Me Go”

  1. My goodness!!! NABANITA!!! This is absolutely brilliant. Till the very end I did not know it was the brutal Death you were talking about.

  3. This is a fantastic piece of writing, Nabanita. Such a novel thought and a brilliant execution too!! Thumbs up for this one!!

  6. Lovely. Liked the opening lines v much-

    You barge in unannounced.
    Not a word,
    Not a sound.
    To take me
    With you away
    While she lays asleep
    Without a clue.
    Tell me thus
    How do I tell her about you?

  18. WOW!!!! Awesome take on the prompt 🙂 Didn't for once got a feeling that you are talking about death till the very end. Thumbs up!! 🙂

    dropping by Write Tribe

  35. Thanks Sugandha…This is not for the free writing prompt.. It's for the 'How Do I Tell Her About You' one 🙂

  43. It is Beautiful Nabanita, it was a pleasure reading. I had a faint idea what you were referring to, which grew in belief with each paragraph, confirming in the end that you were indeed referring to Death. 🙂

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