Linking this to Write Tribe’s : The Language Of Love – A Contest
For this contest we have the choice of either submitting a story, a poem, or an essay on the following prompt:
Listen with the ears of tolerance! See through the eyes of compassion! Speak with the language of love! ~ Rumi
For this contest we have the choice of either submitting a story, a poem, or an essay on the following prompt:
Listen with the ears of tolerance! See through the eyes of compassion! Speak with the language of love! ~ Rumi
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Take all faults
Make them your own.
All quirks irksome,
Which in nature sown.
Beyond the frail,
Temporal moans,
Itβs the soul,
The Soul,
My friend,
To be known.
Through tinted glasses,
Of compassion and care,
Sprinkle on to thee,
Ardor fair.
Listen too,
To humming sounds,
Good or bad,
Be forever bound.
Recall this though,
Itβs not the boons,
But those flaws you fear,
To accept soon.
A chaste bond,
That takes all love,
Away and beyond,
Echelons above.
Drink this air,
Of empathy bare,
Whisper words,
Thy only prayer,
To nurture, to preserve,
Life’s prized flair!
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A wonderful and expressive poem!
Well written… it's only love that can help you look beyond the flaws… all the best
Thanks Uppal π
Thanks Danny π
"Recall this though,
Itβs not the boons,
But those flaws you fear,
To accept soon."
Very well said!
A lovely poem Nabanita.
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Thanks Kalpana π
I'ts the soul, the soul my friend to be known – ever so true Naba, in the end only the soul exists. I love the rhythm of your poem. Beautiful words and easy to read. Great job.
Thanks Suzy….
It's lovely Nabanita!
Keep it up…
words woven so beautifully.soul, flaws,prayer all the ingredients of life altogether in one poem yet so simple.love it dxbnidblog
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Powerful yet soothing words. I'm already in love with this poem:)
Love is not only walking hand in hand, it is walking for each other in need.
And true love does indeed have all these characteristics. Brilliant!
its incredible……..
A great prompt, and a poignant, emotion-filled entry.
Damyanti
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Also, could you put the AZ challenge badge on your sidebar to identify your participation. All the best for the challenge!
Damyanti
Co-host, A to Z Challenge 2014
Twitter: @damyantig
Acceptance, care, empathy….all ingredients of love. Lovely weave.
Your poem is filled with all the love and positivity that is needed to live a great life.
Beautiful poem full of love.
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Hey Nabanita, thanks for such a beautiful and full of love poem
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Just to let you know that I was here – over a year late – but I'm reviewing the entries to make sure the results of this contest are announced finally. My apologies for the inordinate delay. Keep writing!