Listening to our song
I sit here alone,
This room,
Our home,
Left heart-broken, moans!
Sunshine cruel,
Scathes skin flawless.
Devoid of your
Touch doting,
Life’s lost solace.
These lingering days
And nights savage.
Craving for your
Embrace dear,
My soul’s salvage.
Lovely poem on love and longing! Nice one, Naba 🙂
Awww You are missing him already! He will be back soon with his loving touch and then both you and your home will come alive. Ghar aa jao, chat khilati hoon :D. Welcome back!
I wish they could meet again. Loved it 🙂
So much pain…yet poignant. Beautiful!
The second verse shows the longing. so beautifully penned.
Beautifully written…feelings well expressed 🙂
Processing Creativity
Painful…yet beautiful…
Loved it
So beautiful and you seem to be missing him already .. 🙁 when is he back? I hope its very sooon! 🙂
Very beautiful and oozing love!! Wonderful Naba!
Loved it 🙂
the longing is so beautifully described. Lovely!
Just what I would want ot say and what I am going through
Bikram
Nicely expressed Nabanita…was missing you..hope you'll be regular again.. 🙂
lovely poem,
Super Power
Nice to read …. after a long time
Love and longing. Nice.
Missing Love ballads always touch the heart deep. If you have ever fallen in love, You will relate to it.
Lovely poetry Nabanita 🙂 You play with words like a magician.