To alter the wrong,
Courage I need.
Bequeath the known,
Strive and seek.
Two steps forward,
I wish to go.
But obscurity ahead,
A friend or foe?
I fear one day,
Too late it’ll be,
If not today I
Set my soul free.
To wait to begin,
To be inspired,
Renders odds thin,
To acquire which desired.
You are a brave girl, go set your soul free.
Lovely pics on FB, esp the baby pink skirt with boots.
"obscurity ahead, A friend or foe?" … this reminds me of a poem which my mummy introduced me to when i was in my teens.. it goes like this … माँ सा हृदय वीर सी दृढ़ता
मलय पवन से मधुता
यह सब, अन्य और जो
जन के स्वप्न बने हों
तुम्हे आज वेह सहज प्राप्त हो
हर्षित हृदय से है यह कामना
Don't worry, have courage and fly high, my friend. With a loving family and lovely friends, the only way for you is high and higher!
to wait to begin..awesome lines 🙂
You certainly acquired what you desired 🙂 Great words Naba 🙂
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Neat write. Do you click your pics yourself?
good lines!!
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Difficult decision I presume? The only way to set ourselves free is by moving forward! Well written!
And courage you shall find babe!! The wait is worth it.
This is so apt: I fear one day, Too late it’ll be, If not today I Set my soul free. If only we have the guts to do the right thing at the right time no matter how it hurts!
Beautiful ….
Thanks so much Alka 🙂
Lovely poem this Sachin…
Thanks for sharing..
Thanks so much Rachna ! 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Thanks Anita 🙂
What a lovely write up! Awesome!
Thanks … Yes I use my own pics 🙂
Thanks Aparna 🙂
Thanks Danny 🙂 and yes it is a difficult decision indeed, I guess we need to work on it each day..
Thanks 🙂
Indeed Pankti building up the courage and working at it each day is so difficult! Thanks for dropping by 🙂
This is the first time I'm enjoying your poetry form Nabanita…and it's really nice.. 🙂
Thanks Ananya 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Thanks Maniparna…glad you enjoyed it 🙂
I am sure you will soar high and find what you desire..lovely words those..
Such courage in the face of the unknown. Beautifully written and executed! ♥
I fear one day,
Too late it’ll be,
If not today I
Set my soul free……How true, I can relate to this totally.
Beautiful Poem , Lovely
Now that's how a poem should be!! Read a nice poem after a long time.
Keep up the good work!!
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This is a beautiful write Nabanita, so much is left to the reader's interpretation and imagination.
Painful; though beautiful lines Nabanita and I can relate to it……
And I agree with Arpita – "so much is left to the reader's interpretation" which is the best outcome you can relish after writing this poem 🙂
Thanks Seeta 🙂
Thanks Kathy 🙂
Thanks! Me too I identify with these lines the most…
Thanks Ali 🙂
Thanks so much 🙂
Thanks Arpita…Glad you liked it 🙂
Thanks Hemant … Glad you liked it 🙂