Walking with you
Close by my chest
I look around
And feel this warmth
Like never before.
Like never before.
Your smile, your touch
Comforting bliss
Like I have never known.
With you,
With you,
O sweet child of mine,
This world beyond
The window,
Though inviting,
Feels perilous too.
The chirping birds,
melodious.
The flowers,
Colorful, fragrant.
The smiles,
Wider.
The songs,
Happier.
This life,
Full of dreams
O sweet child of mine,
Everything I see now
Is more beautiful
With you tucked
By my chest.
But I fear too,
The other side.
The heartbreaks,
The other side.
The heartbreaks,
The heartaches,
Life’s painful strives.
O Sweet child of mine,
Wearing those
Tiny shoes,
How do I say
I see gloom too
Outside this window
And beyond?
Even on a beautiful day
With everything bright
With flowers in
Full bloom,
The sun generous
With warm sunlight,
Everything seems fine,
But I see,
danger lurking too.
O sweet child of mine,
How do I ever
Stop worrying
For you?
How do I ever
Let go?
Β© www.nabanitadhar.in |
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I’m writing this for BAR-A-THON.
Today’s prompt: Tiny Shoes
Touchy and nice for sure.
I think it's every parent's fear…what's out there for their child. Nice take on both prompts! π
You've woven all the feelings of a mother into this poem Nabanita. The comfort and the warmth as well as the fears.
this is so beautiful and powerful! I feel the same way, being a mother is such a mixture of fear and love and pride #Fridayreflections linked after you
So beautiful and heartfelt Naba! A young mother's outpourings of love and concern for her little bundle!
As parents we never stop worrying about our children. Lovely poem.
When we care for someone the fears are bound to surface. We want safety and health for our children.
Beautiful. This is from every mother Naba and you have even shaped your verses in the shape of footprints π
Every Mother's prayer is that her baby should be happy. Even as we see them grow, become strong individuals and live happy, we continue to worry – perhaps the color of the worry changes. Sweet poem, Naba!Enjoy the moments!
I loved it, Naba. A Mom never stops worrying, does she? And yet truly loving is all about letting go. Someday little M is going to be reading all you've written and smile quietly to herself. β₯
Every mother's heart aches with these worries ever since the first day they hold them close to their chest. Beautiful poem, Naba. Loved it.
Beautiful poem Baba. As moms there is a sort of instant connect from the very first day the baby is in our arms. We Care for them, nurture them and worry about them. Your poem speaks it all.
Beautiful expression showcasing the insecurities and fears faced by every parent! Liked it, Nabanita!
Thanks..
Thanks, Sanch..
We keep feeling it all the time no, Tulika? This fear and this need to take care of our children
Thanks, Mackenzie. Glad you connected to the poem..
Thanks, Suzy.
That is true. We always want our loved ones to be safe.
Thanks , Sunila..
I hope she does, Corinne π
Thanks, Rekha π
Thanks so much π
Thanks so much, Shilpa π
So sweet poem by a lovely mother.<3<3<3
Cheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Lovely words,Nabanita
Thanks π
Thanks π
This is so beautiful…..I loved these words π And thank you for your amazing comment:)
Such a cute little poem, and shoes βΊοΈ