Write Tribe’s 55 Fiction 2014-2 with ‘How I wished’ as the prompt
I saw him that day after all these years. He was smiling.
I saw him that day after all these years. He was smiling.
It made me angry that he was happy while all I had was resentment.
I wished I’d never met Rishi! If only I’d walked away that night twenty years back, life would have been different today. How I wished to turn back time!
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Continuing to Write Tribe’s 100 words on a Saturday 2014 – 7….
Just a glimpse was enough. I knew it was Shilpa.
While I was living a lie, she wasn’t.
She’s the lucky one. I resented the lack of responsibilities in her life.
But if only I’d had the courage then we’d both have been happy, together!
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Linking to NaBloPoMo as well.
Both 55 and 100 I like.
WOW, I loved both your 55 and your 100. Brilliant job! โฅ
We all wish to turn back the needles of time.
You have effortlessly blended both the prompts.
Both regretting their decisions.. Loved how you weaved two prompts together.
Liked both very much..wonderful!!!!
Thanks Rudra…
Thanks Kathy ๐
Thanks Kalpana ๐
Thanks Rajlakshmi ๐
Thanks Ranita ๐
This was good..
Both of them living a life of regrets.
This was one of the best take on Regret! Awesome ๐
Love how you blended the two prompts in one story!
Interesting how both the prompts have gone with regret ๐ Nice work, Naba!
Thanks and yes sad no?
Thanks Sowmya ๐
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Oh how come I didn't think of that Shailaja… Thanks for dropping by ๐
Wow, Naba ! Superb take on the prompts….. a wonderful blend as well ๐
Thanks Sreeja ๐
Brilliant Naba! Loved both of them. Regrets and what ifs of life. ๐
Thanks Jyothi ๐
Wow!! This is awesome!! Loved the way you have woven the 2 prompts and 2 perspectives too!
Reading about Shilpa in the story made me do a double take! :))
Love both of them. So well written, crisp narrative and from the heart. Amazing, Nabanita:)
That was really very good.. aptly portrayed the 2 sides of the same coin
hehe ๐ ๐ Oh yes I used your name here! glad you liked the two perspectives ๐
Thanks Vishal ๐
Thanks Pooja ๐
awesome!!