This post id for UBC Day 13 and also for Write Tribe’s Saturday 2014-2 Prompt
A perfect couple they are;
Holding hands together.
Neighbors envy they both;
Amicable as sun kissed weather.
A beautiful home they built,
With a garden fine.
Twin girls are theirs,
With pigtails sublime.
Always glimpsed are they,
With lips curved in smile.
Anguish and grief from them,
Are off by miles.
Their bond,
Free of strife.
A perfect match,
Their parents arranged.
They live with pomp and joy;
Agony estranged.
But what is it the stars foresee?
In future when the sun sets,
They lay in separate beds.
Their rapport stops burning bright.
And they become strangers in the night?
My fellow Bloggers Richa Singh, Shilpa Garg and Suzy are also taking part in UBC. Drop in and cheer them too if you please :).Trust me nothing motivates us bloggers more than a comment from our readers!
Oh my gawd beautiful! What a perfect take on prompt woman. And how sad that this ain't fiction for few..
Richa
And they become strangers in the night?
could be love-birds patch up on their second flight,
their heart filled with hopes bright.
And they become strangers in the night?
could be love-birds patch up on their second flight,
their heart filled with hopes bright.
Thanks Richa….yes it's sad isn't it that for some it's the truth…
Yes could definitely be Kalpana..infact it should be 🙂
How sad that they grow apart and become strangers in the night. This was a beautiful piece! Well done! ♥
nicely written piece.
Written well..sad that they become strangers at night. Relationships are hard …hope they keep working at theirs.
Thank You so much Kathy 🙂 Yes it is sad that they become apart…
Thanks so much Amar 🙂
Thanks Aparna .. glad you liked it 🙂
It's sad that they become strangers in the night..well written..
Thanks Payal…It's sad indeed!
You have a way with words! Lovely flow to the poem 🙂
Life – who knows what it will bring! So sad, Naba!
Thanks a lot for your kind words 🙂
Indeed Vidya…!!
Sad end 🙁
Stark reality for few.
the ending so tragic… well written
Too good Nabanita – and would you believe it if I told you that I have written a poem with the same title and verse that practically echoes the same thoughts…
Keep writing – mahesh
Sad I know 🙁
Yes it's tragic isn't it? ::(
Thanks for appreciating 🙂
Yes I can believe you Mahesh..this prompt beings these very thoughts in our minds, doesn't it?
You too keep writing 🙂
Great one, Nabanita and perfect words chosen to depict strangers in the night::)
Aah! That's a sad one! But very beautifully written, Nabanita!
Thanks a lot Vishal 🙂
Thanks Shilpa 🙂
Absolutely real…
Thank you 🙂
Beautiful yet sad and real too 🙂
Indeed Sheethal its really sad…Glad you liked it 🙂
Yes indeed what does life have in store for us? Nicely done.
Thanks Suzy..Yes that is the million dollar question..
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