This post is for UBC Day 6.
In stormy breeze,
As all joys cease.
Freezing nights,
Of awry sights.
Those turbulent seas,
Of her lost pleas.
Trampled blossoms,
As life’s held ransom.
Buried in blood; a broken glass,
Tinged red; her hopes alas!
In Deserted streets,
Those bare defeats.
Overcast skies,
Weeping, tear laden eyes.
Those withered trees,
Wailing heart’s debris.
Shredded leaves,
Of lost love she grieves.
Swamped in rain,
Oh her tempest of pain!
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My fellow Bloggers Richa Singh, Shilpa Garg and Suzy are also taking part in UBC. Drop in and cheer them too if you please :).Trust me nothing motivates us bloggers more than a comment from our readers!
My heart felt something inside. Naba love your poetry, the pattern they follow has a rhythm and the emotions they emote very deep…
Richa
I liked this 🙂
No wonder the colder it gets, the more it reminds us of pain. I was almost able to feel every word written here. It did stir me up!
Glad you feel that way Richa 🙂
accha 😛
That makes me feel so happy .. Thanks Ashwini 🙂
Touching…but like all storms, the pain too shall pass.
Rightly said 'This too shall pass'
It makes me think of Mother India and her present condition ..
Very poignant!!
Lady you are very effective with your poems! Those lines have so much of depth in them!
Ohh that's a different interpretation of the poem and I agree!
Thanks for reading Puru.
Thanks Shilpa 🙂
Thank you so much Seeta … You made my day! 🙂
you are so creative nabanita …love the way you play with words 🙂 Have become a fan of your poems
This is just the best thing I could have heard 🙂 You are being too kind but it feels good 🙂
You do write poems so beautifully. Loved the pain in this one.