Who dunnit?


Papers lay strewn all around as Miya looked in disbelief. 

This wasn’t how the house looked when she had left.

‘Great! A theft!’ sighing she suddenly noticed something move. 

She wasn’t alone, the culprit was still there.

And it was a mouse!

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This is my response to the weekly Gargleblaster challenge, which is to answer the following question in exactly 42 words:  Who dunnit?


19 thoughts on “Who dunnit?”

  1. I started to hold my breath, until I read the culprit was a mouse! LOL They can be pretty scary though too. ♥

  2. *hahaha* That's adorable, Naba! There's always that moment of near-panic when you first glimpse that unexpected moving object… 🙂 Thanks for linking to the gargleblaster!

  3. Very cute! I'm not sure that the mouse is that much less terrifying than the intruder though! Shudder… 🙂

  4. Cute, One time I cleaned out a mouse's nest. It had some shiny objects, a few pecans, pretty much what cartoons drew in their homes.

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